Undoing

My life is blessed with things
that do not fit and cannot
be put on display.

Life was never meant
to be lived according
to a list.  And the clock

is a slatted wall
that imprisons my flesh
and not my spirit.

Nothing bars eternity.

I may be swayed
by easy passion,
but the heart keeps
precious truths
immune to idols
and the decay of time.  

While I slip sideways
between the moments
with no cause to fear
my own undoing
because I am undoing
all that is not me.

Note: I often return to a poem and pare it down, here is the shortened version:

Undoing

Life was never meant
to be lived according
to a list.  And the clock

is a slatted wall
that imprisons my flesh
and not my spirit.

Nothing bars eternity.

I slip sideways
between the moments
with no cause to fear
my own undoing
because I am undoing
all that is not me.

What would be left of you if you were to come undone?

Shortened version:

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